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Bravo.

Very well done.

Last few lines are chilling.

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Thank you!

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Just to make sure, the protagonist was a ghost/dead? Going for a Sixth Sense/The Others type thing? I loved the very last line. I actually laughed out loud....

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He could be dead, or in a coma, or crazy... I'LL NEVER TELL!

Glad I could make you laugh!

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