Love the first paragraph, sets the stage. Blood and bones indeed. The little "breaks" (ex. VD check) give a full idea of what such a life entails... It humanizes the narrator and engages the reader.
I wonder what the source of inspo was for this one? Either way, great work and it shows your range as a writer.
Thank you so much for your comment! Mostly I just know a lot of miners and thought there might be something a bit eldritch-horror about things underground. There's more to it but that's the main one, and eventually I might do up a post about my inspirations.
Love the first paragraph, sets the stage. Blood and bones indeed. The little "breaks" (ex. VD check) give a full idea of what such a life entails... It humanizes the narrator and engages the reader.
I wonder what the source of inspo was for this one? Either way, great work and it shows your range as a writer.
Thank you so much for your comment! Mostly I just know a lot of miners and thought there might be something a bit eldritch-horror about things underground. There's more to it but that's the main one, and eventually I might do up a post about my inspirations.