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This is super fun. Love the defamiliarization. The green cylinder out of the glass case was the best, took me a second.
Thanks man!
I like it. But I'd love a different line than the trailer hitch one. I know you have something way better in your arsenal.
You're right, I probably do. In my actual doc I have it as a placeholder but I wanted to get the chapter shared. It's very rough. And thanks! Your feedback is always appreciated, Jimmy!
It reminds me a little, just a little, and obviously in a good way of the creature coming to the Bay Area to get Theo in War of the Flowers
Cool! I haven't read that one yet but I'll check it out!
One of my all time favorites. I can't imagine you not liking it. Takes a while before the fantasy element kicks in, but when it does it goes hard.
This is super fun. Love the defamiliarization. The green cylinder out of the glass case was the best, took me a second.
Thanks man!
I like it. But I'd love a different line than the trailer hitch one. I know you have something way better in your arsenal.
You're right, I probably do. In my actual doc I have it as a placeholder but I wanted to get the chapter shared. It's very rough. And thanks! Your feedback is always appreciated, Jimmy!
It reminds me a little, just a little, and obviously in a good way of the creature coming to the Bay Area to get Theo in War of the Flowers
Cool! I haven't read that one yet but I'll check it out!
One of my all time favorites. I can't imagine you not liking it. Takes a while before the fantasy element kicks in, but when it does it goes hard.